Skylit Avenue

Reviewed on 10/14/08

Run By - Mandie
Skylit Avenue

First Impression

I wasn't too impressed with the image header, but looking at the coding and header as a whole it is a clean, simple layout.

I notice Mandie has atrocious grammar. My favorite!

The background she used is a texture of Spencer's, but Mandie has not credited her. Shame. They tend to call that stealing. Let's hope she fixes that.

Navigation

The navigation is easy to spot and use: it is in the bottom of the header. It's a rollover, and the font she uses, though I love it, doesn't go with the image. A cursive font would have been more apropos. I think Stats should probably be renamed 'site" or something similar, as this page also has information about the site, such as Past Layouts and a biography.

Header

As I have mentioned earlier, I'm not huge on the header. The images appear to be blended well, but the tree brushes seem very out of place to me. A grey texture, one like the bacground, would have been better. I also feel the lined paper content background is out of place, but I just think paper should be used when something looks drawn or scrapbook like. The "win a free domain" blinkie is driving me crazy. Certainly there are less flashy wasy to advertise that?

Coding

The coding matches the header, which I always love. It is also pretty sinmple, but not in a boring way. The link text is a bit small, but I'm sure she did that for the "fuzzy" look. [In Firefox it is small and blurry. In IE, it is a bit easier to read, and italic.] It doesn't look the same in different browsers, but it is still readable, and the alignment doesn't change or anything.

She uses an extermal stylesheet.

Content

Website/Blog Layouts

Wallpapers

Icons

Requests

Tutorials

Summary

I've known Mandie for quite a long time, I even made a layout for her once! It's nice to see that she has been able to come into her own with a layout site that provides good layouts. However, there is still a lot of work to be done, as she doesn't properly credit sources, tends to code layouts the same, and has bad grammar, which usually turns me away from sites. If one doesn't take the time to communicate clearly, what does that say about their attitude and the quality of their content?

Sugesstions

  • Credit ALL of your sources appropriately. Sure, you credit Deviant Art, but WHO on DA have you taken from? That's what counts.
  • Please improve your grammar! You have been told this time and again from other reviewers, please heed our advice!
  • Practice using textures, different cropping, and advanced coloring effects on your icons.
  • Vary the coding in your layouts more. They tend to look the same coding-wise. Actually, vary who is feature in them as well.






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