Kaytlin-Star

Reviewed on 09/20/08

Run By - Kaytlin
Kaytlin-Star

First Impression

This site looks really boring. The layout is clean and simple, but the colors are not that great and it looks like this layout took 2 minutes to make.

You're thirteen years old, yes? Well, that better not be your real name in the footer. Do you know how stupid it is for someone so young to put their real name on the internet? You also mention in your about me the state you currently live in and where you originate from. BAD. You're basically inviting someone to find you! Please, for your own safety, remove that information! [Note: I would have put this in Other, but I had to get the point across.]

You use grammar, bravo!

I suggest moving your dragions somewhere else. Having them in the Welcome paragraph is tacky and unecessary.

Navigation

The site is very, very easy to navigate. There are four links in the navigation bar: home, kaytlin, site info, and resources. On the sidebar one can find links to blogs she visits often, and to latest comments.

Header

It is green. With the site's name stroked in white, a black doodle flower next to it and dots white along the bottom. It's simple, and I like simple, but I don't think that the greens she chose look good together. I think using the light green and another color entirely would have been better.

Coding

The coding is simple. It matches the header. Different fonts are used, which is always nice. The line height is a bit excessive though, it looks to be about 16px. It's still too boring for me. I think I would have liked it more if there was another color, like blue or pink.

She uses an external style sheet and Word Press. Though I do not use Word Press, it seems everything is in order.

Content

Resources

Summary

I assume this is a personal blog site above a visitor site, as there are so few visitor resources. None of them really impressed me, either. I have no desire to return to the site, and unless other visitors are friends, I assume they feel the same. But as I've said, I don't think this site is visitor-oriented.

Sugesstions

  • Remove your personal information that states which state you live in and your real name. [However, that may be a psuedo-nym in which case you do not have to remove it.]
  • Add more visitor content? You have very few of everything that you offer. It would appear you do not update it often, so what keeps people coming unless they are friends?
  • Spice up your headers and coding just a bit. There are ways to be simple, but interesting.
  • Make linked resources and links that lead outside of your site open in a new window.






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