Flawless Secret

Reviewed on 10/13/08

Run By - Jessica
Flawless Secret

First Impression

This site's layout took a very long time to load, and I have a very fast connection. I can't imagine how long it might take on slow computers.

The layout has nice componenets: I love the flower brush and the sripes on the left, but after examining this layout a bit longer, I find it very unattractive. It's also extremely wide. If you have a 1024 X 768 resolution, you have to scroll to the right to see the navigation. Even on my laptop, [1200 X 800] it scrolls at the bottom.

Jessica has bad grammar. Really bad grammar.=(

Navigation

The navigation is off to the far right, and it composes of spaced out white images that do not match the layout at all, save for the font used.

This is the first site I've reviewed where the navigation actually confused me. There is a "content" link and a "you" link. The "you" actually leads to a request page, so logically it shoud be renamed "Requests." Then there is the "Pick-Up" link, which leads to an uncoded page where requestees pick up what the ordered. Just e-mail the works, my lord. How lazy and unprofessional.

The content is not that easy to navigate. Most of it leads to a gallery, where you must click link after link to get to the content.

Why is credits a text link far above the rest of the navigation? The rest of the links are pretty self explanitory.

Header

There isn't really a header image, it's more of an all encompassing background image. As I've mentioned earlier, it very unattractive. The giant black box poloroid-thing for the c-box looks atrocious and is WAY too large for the tiny c-box it contains.

The blue lined paper + crumped paper is really bad looking. I think the layout would have looked much better had you not stuck the random crumpled paper in the middle for the content.

Why are the Affiliates located in the top left-hand corner in a drop-down menu?

Coding

The coding doesn't match the layout image AT ALL. The text is a dark blue, a color found nowhere in the image. The links match, but only because they are black. I haven't seen any text effects, but I doubt they'd match.

Content

The page leads to a list of content. At the top there is a "Graphics" link, which leads to main page of the gallery where she puts almost all of her resources. This is pointless, as she links them in the list below.

Banners

Textures

Stock

Vectors (Graphic Designing)

Layouts

Site Names
Color Themes

PNG's

Patterns

Brushes

Wallpapers

Icons (My icons)

Summary

The content on this site isn't spectacular. The site isn't great. There are some banners that are really good, but it's very hard to find them and the rest of the content negates them as a reason to return. The site is also a nightmare to read. I will never return here again. If you love soap operas, you might want to take a gander.

Sugesstions

  • Spell check and use proper grammar. Your site is difficult and confusing to read.
  • Remove your broken links, or fix them.
  • I strongly suggest removing the site names page.
  • LINK to the sites on the credit's page. Don't just paste the url.
  • Remove the color themes you didn't make.






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